"snow" in autumn


"snow" in autumn
"shout- shout-" arrived in autumn.In the thick flower bush, bloom a dandelion with pure."The mother of Ji Ji-dandelion, your kid is about to take off tonight!"The small bird is joyful of call a way.
evening, the moon appears at built-up cloud in.The breeze spirit flies to dandelion cluster, lightly on blowing, Hua-thousands the dandelion of the floss sort float toward that clean moon.In this silent night, the leaf"Hua Hua" loudly moves and seem is saying to the dandelions:"Dandelion, dandelion, come I am here, come I here ah!"Not and in a short while, the dandelions then land in succession in the grass cluster.
the god seem to know that the dandelions are in the dibble, under of rain is so cool, the sunlight is so moderate, so gentle and soft."Stand" dandelion in one side mother hair words:"My children, do you know, after waiting you to grow up, will"snow" in next autumn hey!"The dandelions all a head of fog water, all puzzle to don't understand of ask a way:"Snow in autumn?How may, autumn isn't likely to snowing!""Can really snowing in autumn of ah, children."Stand on the dandelion mother flank of the small field mouse draw a voice to draw color's saying:"Zhi Zhi, I tell you, snow in autumn is very beautiful, very soft, put in the center of palm you can't also turn!"The small field mouse words sound just fell, nearby of the animal all then fought to be the first a ground of Kua for great autumn of snow have much beautiful.
"that I pour to and see, snow in autumn exactly have much beautiful, much beautiful!"A dandelion to dandelion the mother and animal at the side of body say.
passed by for a day, passed by for two days, passed by for a week ……after a month, small dandelions all grew up, but who have never forgotten dandelion"snow" in autumn said by mother."Shout- shout-" breeze spirit has already can't waited for, it lightly on blowing, the dandelion of floss sort in the sky dances in the wind.The underground opens a dandelion with pure, sky float a "floss", also is really snow of autumn!
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