acquaint with unfamiliar home town again


acquaint with unfamiliar home town again
everybody have one to belong to his own home town, and everybody will love his home town, because there are the close relatives of his love in the home town.I love my home town and close relatives, but I not too understand to the current conditions of my home town, for I the impression of that beautiful home town still keep staying around two year agos, also really want to return to home town to walk and enjoy in retrospect my childhood.
two year agos, the Mom and Dad want to go out a work and put in the custody of me at the nobody of home, so, I was taken grandfather's house to live.I am only still small, also is a little to the impression of my home town just at that time.Remember my home town locates at in a secluded small town, is surrounded by the mountain everywhere there, mountain green water show, environment beautiful.
I like the countryside in autumn very much, the rice valleys all grew gold Can the ear of rice of the Can, far and far hope to go, be like the aureate carpet of one expanse, there is also the forest to look beyond distance, especially when rain clears up behind is the one lately green to come into view, can not make the public feeling relaxed?
the home town of my scenery daintiness, I love you and had long time no see. There is a more complete"small story", there are 12 more flexible person images in the story and concentrate pen and ink to release 12 living appearances with inside contact.

1, must pay attention to a detail to depict for the person in the story, the especially small action depicts.

《grain of rice, valley grain and blood and sweat 》

helpless of he uses chopsticks helplessly the Dao Teng wear in the bowl, suddenly that snow-white rice passed in and out some yellow, that is a grain of valley, and the face of father that ancient bronze work has a similar color.His heart shivers, an act that sent rice for father in childhood presented again at at present.

that is the noon in summer of a hot summer, the father sits eat on the Long in the farmland he sends of rice, is also eat shallow bottom of time, the valley in a few yellows exposed out."Throw away, daddy.""Gossip irresponsibly!"The father roared like leopard son a , he didn't also see a father once cut up rough thus during a lifetime, the next situation made him the whole life difficult more to forget:The father puts chopsticks on the farmland Long and use that full is the hand of mud valley grain a grain per grain ground Nian get up to put into a mouth and lock eyebrows, then is difficult a to swallow ……"kid, that is the blood and sweat of our farmer!"Father to bellyful of grievances of he says.

2, use flexibly a person detail to describe and the environment detail describe of various method.

example a:He takes book to walk into classroom.(Describe)

a Ci eyebrow the kind purpose silver hair the old left hand take a book, the right hand walks with a cane and hobbles ground to walk into classroom.

the expression describe, portrait describe, action describe

description:Is objective, feelings color isn't strong

depiction:Feelings color is very fresh clear

example two, try to curl hair down, the classmate demeanor in the class was each difference.(Describe)

try to curl hair down, the whole class immediately was like a pot for blasting open.The some person is smug, start to raise cross-legged, the leg without intermission and up and down swings and has a kind of smug felling;Some persons cover up head on the table, need not ask and then know:Didn't definitely test like;Have of then take to get a goal Gao not low book the son Ji Ji Zha Zha ground not to discuss;(next 88)Have of then picked up a pen to start establishing correct text to ownly try book;My sit at the same table-he claps to try book all alone and claps thigh all alone, don't live a ground of Rang Rang:"Good heavens!I didn't want to live!How to even do amiss so simples, I was simply to take a piece of bean curd to bump to die like ……"

order noodles to combine, action depiction, language depiction

example three, he takes a book to arrive at reading room and very diligently pushes in the seat.(Describe)

just walked to the doorway of reading room, a blast of hot air right against the face rushed toward.Step into reading room one lo, Mao, the person is really many!What they sat sits, station stand, imitate an old monk of Buddha to sit quietly and meditate a sort to sink to immerse in the world of book;Still is milling about to seek seat, find books and newspapers of ……however surroundings but quiet surprising, only the fluorescent lamp sends out'-'of the voice voice that rings and slightly turns over a book.He cans not helps holding breath quiet spirit, hold close book, Dian rise heel, gingerly stick in, the east twists west to move ground to avert from crowd and with difficulty discovered an empty.He immediately the flash across sit down.

the action combine, exaggerate, the white copy, the action describe(the small detail depicts)



person detail depiction:Expression describe, action describe, mental state describe, language describe, outward appearance describe

environment detail depiction:The white copy, exaggerates, orders noodles to combine, the action combine