Composition of doing a good turn

Composition of doing a good turn
finish doing morning exercise, each student represents to line up tidy of the troops arrive at a solemn national flag set bottom after gathering, set out.
more than 100 persons constitute of the troops vastly and mightily walk down the street, but sing stalwart but emolliently learn thunder Feng song, but have been already said to smile.About after half an hour, finally arrived at the standing alone old man's welfare hospital in the house.
the classmates take out in succession delicious tasty, the nourishment enrich of fruits, sent to the aged a pair of hand with warm doubleses in.Is close behind, we help the aged the dust for guarding a gate a window, table chair to sweep cleanly again, spotless, have a brand-new look.The aged is rolling on the floor laughing, Kua are we to live thunder Feng!
at this moment, I just realized thunder Feng to help others for the happy classic quality.
the activity ended, we unwilling to partly left a welfare hospital.Pass this activity, I knew:Dedicating an one benevolence to the other people realizes fine emotion not to is to acquire, but pays.Composition of doing a good turn
today, I did a good matter and helped an old grandmother to lead street.
afternoon, I go to new China bookstore and read.Family, I leap to jump all the way small run, imperceptibly was our intersections of the west of the school.When I am about to cross the street, suddenly see an old grandmother shake to sway ground to prepare to cross the street, I put slow step, the in the mind thinks:Want to go to help this old grandmother?Hi!Help others for enjoy, but I am again first that one is little member of team, should go to help her.
I hurriedly run over there and say to old grandmother:Old grandmother, I hand you past!Say two arms that hand hands old grandmother, take green light, the one-step one step slowly once walked zebra crossing.Led street, old grandmother said a quite a few voice thanks to me!I shake to say:Need not, old grandmother all the way walk like.Finish saying I again urgently blunt blunt the ground rush through toward new China bookstore.
my in the mind feels very happy at this time, because I did a good matter.Composition of doing a good turn
I love my mother.My mother also really loves me.
the mother's health condition isn't good, very afraid cold.Once, she got sick, I hurriedly poured one glass water to the mother and took a medicine for mother.I fear a mother suffered, tell that the story lets mother listens to and scatter the mother's attention.
winter in last year is specially cold, a day evening goes to bed a front, I the lying be warm for her on the mother's bed drive.The mother saw oddly ask me:Do you want with mother and sleep together tonight?I say Oh, no!I this is Wen Xi to wait on to kiss.Does Wen Xi wait on to kiss?What mean?The mother felt more strange.My favour says:This is an ancient story, I taught ours 《innovation reading 》 high school from teacher Lin of.Be chase bedding warmth first and, you sleep of time not cold.Mother touched ground of Kua I am a good kid.
I think:The mother is very hard, we should help our mother the affair for doing some what lies in one's powers more.Composition of doing a good turn
morning, thin awake.It sees a window outside, the sun only shines in glory, and the weather is very good.Is thin to think:Great occasion of nation stanza of today I am thin to do a good affair.To, if the homework of E E can't write me to see a thin elder brother the weather is really good today to it, you and I have fun in a short while.Nana says.Go away, little devil who have a great achievement the man plays with you, I want to do a special affair today, don't bother me!Nana cries and discommoded to sadly leave.Is thin to think and think, I should do what good affair, in the state of the nation this day?If the bad person comes to to kidnap my grandmother, I use to hunt qiang to beat it!Grandmother at the right moment yells at this time:Thin darling carries table the tea on the word to grandmother to drink for grandmother!I favour this, your own business do-it-yourself, you want to drink tea by yourself, oneself pours to drink for he or she, I the great occasion of nation stanza want to do a good matter today, have no the effort pour tea for grandmother!Is thin to fantasy again:If the shameless dog drops into river, I want to neglect the peace or chaos get shameless dog to come up, exactly the shameless dog came and reached to shake medicine tail to say at this time:Is thin, please give me a little water to drink, I am very very thirsty!Get away, I favour this?Who sometimes drink for you, don't disturb the affair that I think that the state of the nation does a good turn.
thin wanted to don't also figure out that a good affair comes and then arrives at a mother to ask all day long:Mother, I think the great occasion of nation successively does a matter piece, don't know to do what good?Have fun with Nana, arrive tea for grandmother, or give the shameless dog some water to drink, all call to do a good turn, do a good turn and know from nearby of the affair start to start in!

with the person in the book airtight language


with the person in the book airtight language
evening, I feel beloved 《Andersen's nursery tale 》 once in a very long while can not fallen asleep, in the dim moonlight, I arrived at a place of snow and icebound, there, 1 wears to break dress, barefoot, hand jelly of the red little girl is taking a box of match to the pedestrian for passing by call sell, isn't she the little girl in 《match seller's little girl 》 !
I quickly go straight up to go and take off own coat to throw on for little girl.Thank you!The little girl appreciates of say to me.The little girl that thoughts of such a wretchedness finally will pathetic dying, my in the mind is really not pleasurable.Need not, to, do you have grandmother?Have!Little girl eyes inside deeply happy ray of light, but immediately obscure next go to, she go to heaven.I hurriedly comfort her:Don't be sad that two of you definitely meet noodles!The little girl arouses to move:Really?Can I really see grandmother?Answer her to is affirmation that deeply sinks.She will at heaven in meet with grandmother.
your father mother?They they are in the home.The little girl throat at this time's seeming is what things choked, the voice breaks continuously continuous of they to you, O.K.?Little girl deep breathing for a while, tell me:Still go.Still go?The little girl is obviously telling a lie, let own kid sell match in the snow and icebound, this, also go?I didn't ask again what, time just wanted to ask, spread the dialogue that a burst of voice interrupted two of us.
the old elder sister get up!The younger brother shouts loudly in my ear, , originally this is a dream!A marvellous dream!If, the happy life of match seller's little girl and grandmother at heaven in, that should much good! Person describe, according to describe of object, can is divided into outward appearance depiction(portrait, clothes and expression), language depiction, action depiction and mental state depiction and detail depiction.Write a person, can directly write hair and draw eyes, make it lifelike, this calls direct depiction;Can also pass an indirect method to write a person, if say to introduce someone through a turning of third party, pass to describe third party to come to anti- Chen someone to set off by contrast by writing prospects thing a someone etc..(Next 88)according to describing person of detailed slightly, importance, wear Mo of thick thin, we can also induce the person depiction copies for white, the cartoon type delineate, thick Mo heavy colourful thin copy an etc.. A, the white copy the writing Jian Lian's simplicity, don't add to exaggerate to set off by contrast.It doesn't have the depiction of strong color, don't ask for help of parable and compare etc. rhetoric skill, also need not or use less adjective, still keep describing the image of having an accident the thing.Such as: It what to come in is a black thin Sir, moustache, wear to fix attention on a mirror, ride on one various books of foldings.(Lu fast 《rattan wild Sir 》 ) empty few languages, activate one to is frugal life and cure to learn careful scholar's image. Two, the cartoon type delineate namely with the tone of exaggerated skill, Ye Yu, the person delineate into a strange form of strange form, fantastic six leave of image, sneer at, hate by expression, sympathize with etc. thought feelings.Such as: He if lower the head to see, positively is could not see own toe, the part in the center swell up, will hold up view.The flower grey hair that is sparse to pull to a tee combs Long backward, dipped water and there is no one to be confused.On the face of pure white Xi, can't see a crease, be like just the plain wheat roll of pot.In order to being fat, nose, eyes seem to be specially small;In order to being small, seem to be particularly to fascinatingly have absolute being.(Wang Run Zi 《sell a crab 》 ) pass depiction, mold the image that filters a mouth:Is old and fat, clean and neat fashionable, rich the Tai is ample, Gao Ren Yi etc..Permeate the derision of bookmaker in the depiction. Three, the thick Mo is heavy colourful thin copy namely with vivid, image, vivid portrayal of language, in many ways, multilayers and many angles, the delicacy completely depicts person image.Such as: Sit at south head of is a thin thin, the Chinese of 50 top and bottoms;Wear a long gown with yellow tooth, bite a cigarette holder in mouth, follow that light of fire of a bright a bright, the Teng rises a burst of smoke. His face is yellow in take white, thin call the person worry and seem big disease lately the person more, but the spirit is very good, there is no a little dispirited appearance, hair approximately an inch long, obviously didn't shear for a long time, but a root per root vigorously keeps Shu.The beard beats an eye very much and seem the thick Mo write of belong to body one word. Is yellow in take a white face, thin worrisome, keep Shu on the head inch grow of hair;Tooth Huang Yu Sha's long gown;Belong to a body one word beard;A yellow cigarette holder held in left hand, a head of of Anne's smoke has already fumed black.( Tired 《one side 》 ) these are three, the author passes overall and meticulous depiction and depict source in under the hard condition of Lu fast spirit feature, a more old more stubborn great image of warrior, then impressively stand erect in our in fronts.

I am just a stranger


I am just a stranger
sky still deep blue;Water is still pure;The loose cypress is still beautifully green;But already the thing is a person not, take in fine threads melancholy in the bise, stand disconsolate winter, hope to shake don't be within the reach of of it near not- near, shout far not- far;Go back and forth in the prosperous street, fan Mang, my direction?My dream??
rain float wet soft hair;The tears are smooth wet face;The stranger blocked road.Be getting more helpless, foolish foolishly hope a vegetable not acquaint with of stranger, in fact I am in the their eyes, is just also a stranger just, a helpless stranger passes by here, by accident once trampled boundary, left a few footprints just, drive tears smooth Be getting wetter, rain diluted, end, didn't leave a silk ever once walked of trace everything with the breeze floated spread, had no one silk I ever once lived of trace
let the breeze blew about my dream, let rain took my tears hope shake not be within the reach of of dream, under the blue sky, I is a stranger, I be just a stranger, I kissed Xiu but lead, not left one silk trace, my tears my dream won't reply existence, everything with the breeze float spread me be just a stranger, I am just
brush off dust and go to, wave hand, let the world of mortals companies and live whistling spread in fact be a stranger also quite good, can't ast least have too many helpless, everything all with breeze but spread autumnal winds blow kiss bitter yellow defoliation, in succession float fall of the destiny of the leaf arrive this end, however they but safely dance in the wind, waiting for in spring give them the opportunity of the rebirth, I believe, tomorrow of spring, they again happinessly at head laugh heartily
I is a stranger, I be just a stranger spring next year I will again pass by here, I is a stranger, I without sorrow, I didn't worry my Xiao spread me comfortable write a person is high school stage composition in the middle of the teaching the most basic training contents, request student can write have blood have fleshy of living person.What about how to write a person to live?This skill that needs to make use of good depiction. The well-trained usage that describes skill needs after more long-term discipline.Especially thinking is proficient, butter both sides of bread, even need to pay effort of a hardship.However, there were many classmates to pass by in 3 the beginning of the years after composition train, still can not nicely control and make use of this kind of skill.They write the person of hard sign, talk more not ascend lifelike, live vivid now.In fact, writing the good person isn't difficult.(Next 88)in addition to want the peacetime more practices, more important want usually and pay attention to nearby of person, to describe of the person carry on a careful observation and research. Only finally understand thoroughly describe the bottom of object inside, clearly it knows the feeling it know, just can write it jump however paper up.Don't is deep of living foundation, wanting to write a good article can not imagine.So, if in the life already backlog certain living material, how again make use of to describe skill then can write person to live? First, grasp the characteristic of person, with the form is vivid portrayal.The person and otherses have a same place, there is also different place.No matter is an outward appearance, act, the language is still personality, person and others to always have some places homology or likeness and have some places different.To want to write person to live the place of key is the characteristics that wants to write this person, write this person and the differentiation of others.Thou many Chinese and Foreign literature classics provided successful example for us to the depiction of person now.For example the 《Three Kingdoms historical novel 》 medium Cao holds, Liu Bei, close a feather, bore clear etc., all of several 100 personal thing images are so flexible and moving.In the lesson originally in we have already learned a lot of examples like this, for example 《the Lu reaches a boxing to beat town Kansai 》 is one text, the Lu reaches domineering and thickly to stew, tactful, impatient, pass a series of depiction drive vivid lifelikely inform, leave to us deep impression. Carry on depiction to the person heart world secondly, because of to person thought the molding of personality depiction of canning not get away from the heart world.1 kind is to directly carry on depiction to the person heart world, write how it think, how feel.For example lesson originally medium of 《a small matter 》 , be me to see the carter send an old woman toward policeman to halt walk to, have a mental state to directly write, announced to public a knowledge member's mind vibration in a small matter.Carrying on to the heart world is another indirect describe, this kind of describe, the language depiction is most important, because the speech depicts for true feelings passing the depiction to the person language, then canning the thought personality of person.The depiction of person language usually comes out by dialogue embodiment.The dialogue depiction wants to notice a few aspects as follows:One is try hard for the personality of showing the person.If the person wants to say that oneself will say, the words should say, not the author replaces other people to talk.Two want to try hard for in brief, slice to hate loquacious. Person language not the ability original kind keep recording living medium of language, need to polish to process, make it simple and direct, clearly quick, reflect the characteristic that talks.Three is the words of person to still want with facial expression and act to describe knot to put together, complement each other.

I respect of person


I respect of person
at nearby, I am worth my respecting of the person is a lot of, while the person whom I respect most is my mother.
my mother is the person of a diligence.In childhood, father worked in the other parts of country, hardly come back at ordinary times, all of the heavy burden of home pressed on the mother's shoulder, she was holding to hold household chores and cultivating farmland and also needed to look after our 3 younger brother Jies.
everyday, she early rises early bed, a person alone go to to work in farmland, she that drive sweat soak through of clothes, cheeks be tanned by the sunlight, and pull the figure of plank car, have been staying deep place at my memory.
for the sake of the income of increment home, the mother feeds chicken, pig, and cow...etc. again, heavy manual labor, make the mother gradually emaciated, the grey hair increases, the shape is also no longer outstanding, and the crease also silently climbs to ascend her cheeks.
my mother is the person of a docile.In my memory, she has never had already quarreled with other people and treats a neighbor, she is always enthusiastic about a help.Who the house met economy difficulty, the mother lends thrifty in food and expenses money to them and helps a neighbor to tide over difficult period.
the mother will sew of handicraft, usually help a person in the village to sew to mend clothing, never accept any guerdon, the mother's personal conduct receives the person of hometowns compliment.
peacetime, we do amiss to settle a dispute feeling, the mother doesn't beat and scold us as well, but education of the patience delicacy we, we learn to be a person, with artificial kind, academic association tolerate, endure to let.
the mother is a person of filial piety, always delicious of send to grandpa grandmother, grandmother likes to listen to a big drama, as long as the nearby village has sing a big drama of, the mother always pulls grandmother to listen to a big drama with the plank car.Old man's house got sick, the mother worked hard in spite of criticism ground to wait upon before bed, and a moment isn't willing to give up either to leave.The mother's behavior profoundly influenced me, I secretly swore, future, also definitely do a person of filial piety.
this is my mother, the person whom I respect most .A docile, diligence, filial piety of mother, a banality but great of mother.Two goods the girl friend went to my in home and visits for the first time yesterday, while having a meal asked belonging to of my father mutually is what.
I say:Is a Chinese Zodiac Sign inside most Mao of!Do you try and guess?
two goods girl friend even wanted to don't think and then directly answer:Donkey!
then see master son metal gray face, the others of table all directly suppress internal injury in the article describing scenery, the adequacy makes use of parable, personification, can get the scenery depiction more vivid. Personification, mean usage imagination, the thing be the person write.(Next 88)describe scenery with the personification method, can make scenery live a new life to move, image, increase the atmosphere of article.Using is personification, have to find out scenery and others' of a little bit alike. The parable is to make the another to a thing ratio and have a little bit alike thing with it, also call draw an analogy.The parable is used to really slice, plain easily understand, can make the scenery described more the beauty is moving, leave a deep and fresh clear impression for reader.To make parable accurate have to learn in the observation of the colleague launch association of thought:Want does this scenery what thing resemble with.Again want, they which places resemble, the likeness finding out both orders, the likeness point seeks accurately, parable also more accurate.Seek likeness to order, generally can consider as follows from several aspects:Outline likeness, color likeness, voice likeness, length size likeness, dynamic state alike etc..Please see nether excellent piece part: In spring, she is like the fairy maiden in the nursery tale.The defoliation of the light green of summit of hill is loose, be like the yarn towel of fairy maiden.The green tree between the mountains is like the green tunic of fairy maiden, the in the interval blooms of white pear flower, be like to embellish in the blossom of green tunic.Below the hills of the cherry flower bush is like the flower skirt of fairy maiden.Under the foot of a hill of one slice dandelion flower, be like fairy maiden the yellow wearing to embroider to spend shoe. The parable here is plain to easily understand, and combines the parable and the personification to use at a cake of, increased the vivid and interest of article more, at the same time, also better earth's surface reached the feeling of little author's fancy to spring.

Concerning rather wave of composition

Concerning rather wave of composition
the morning on Monday, I travel with mother.The coach opened to come over, I quickly ran with mother to have good seat in the car.Start driving, I started to sing song son with younger brother, a per hour passed by we finally arrived loose orchid mountain four star class hotel, we have good lunch and have already taken a rest to go to sea beach for a while.Looking at surge blunt come up, I hurriedly ran toward ocean.A surge is blunt to come up, I drank an one mouthful sea water, really salty.I make the aunt buy a swimming belt for me, the mother embraces me a top up the swimming belt and puts I to deep water.A surge is blunt to come over me to is coast.I start picking up small shell again, I discovers small shell of a seeming to be grain of cooked rice to downwards drill, interesting pole.
the second day morning, we have self-help breakfast, in have fruits, noodles and chips, , , ,I eat with relish.The next station is the Phoenix mountain harbor paradise, a lot of places I can not play, because I am too short.Afterwards we found out an earthquake house, there really play, the aunt says the felling is like to sit tractor in the earthquake house.We finally found out swimming area, I most like of is aquatic slippery slide, I a slip down water to charge forward to have fun really to heart's content.
my second visited in the joys voice to end in the joke.
sail sail of this travels very deep to the impression that you leave, visit to record this time you also held tight the deepest to your impression of come to write, I also saw a lot of sentences of daintinesses and still had much of a progress.

arrived in autumn



arrived in autumn, everythings all changed.There is no the snow and icebound in winter, have no spring of birds' twitter and fragrance of flower, also have no knowing of summer sing, but this is a season that makes farmer the pleased result of the uncles.
today is a weekend, I go to grandmother's house with mother.Just got off, felt a very thick autumn of cool idea.Walk on the path, the wayside white poplar tree is high big straight, a burst of breeze once blows, and withered Huang's leaf then fell down in succession.The corn ground of the both sides inside, all laden with full big corn club, some families have already accepted corn in the ground, full is abundant joy on the face.I and mother drive this at present of the prospects profoundly drew on.Scan widely to hope to go, one big slice of apricot with red fire the wood be surrounded by the loose cypress of surroundings dark yellowish green, seem to be particularly to rob an eye.Under foot of a hill, connect the potato ground of slice inside, people at respectively division of labour, dig to dig, luck of luck, everyone busily works.
unconscious, have already arrived a family.Home town of autumn is true beautiful!
the autumn home town of home town of autumn isn't cold lukewarm, although the air is to have no fresh before, leaf's also starting fading,had one thing more and more maturity that was the paddy rice.Come out family, scan widely to hope to go to, the first see of is a paddy rice, so many paddy rices a big slice of a big slice of full yes.The paddy rice imperceptibly and gradually grows up at people familiar.Home town of autumn is a gold yellow of, basically the whole things are all yellow.Home town of autumn, the paddy rice is mature to become yellow.Home town of autumn, the small grass withered away to become a yellow.Home town of autumn, the leaf of treetop is also gradually yellow to get up, before long will fade.On the countryside inside, mire road, path side, ignore is what green plant all basically be withering away.Particularly small grass, it is waiting for the approach in spring, add a green for world again.Home town of autumn is a season of bumper harvest, peach tree up knot have big peach, the pear treetop knot has big pear, the orange treetop knot rises a large orange, the paddy rice in the countryside also mature etc. much more edible fruits all mature.The breeze is so soft, water is so of fluency, the sky is so blue, people are so of active.Home town of autumn be so, with match equally in spring.Home town of autumn is much warmer than the in winter wanting of the home town, home town of autumn compare more to have to be cool in summer., Home town of autumn, you is how get soft!
home town always home town, everything of home town possesses singly.
is exactly an abundant season, the rice of the paddy field inside gold has already been getting more familiar.The very heavy Sui son presses the rice Ji lift not and at first, a burst of autumnal winds is blown and brings about a golden rice wave, and I sink to immerse in the joy., Autumn is golden!
rain!The continuing autumnal rains is like a miss with beautiful bright Piao to pour out own worry.I didn't avoid, it was my face to make the autumnal rains heartily smooth.Rain stopped, my title looked up at, blue sky if wash, blue must make public inebriate., Autumn is blue!
stroll on the path of countryside, the wayside was filled with the wild chrysanthemum in snow white and smelt for a while and also took dew drops of fragrance.Although they don't have the chrysanthemum in park beautiful, make people 100 see not to be disgusted with, because send forth the mud breathing for getting along with on their body., Autumn is white!
arrived in autumn, the big tree started defoliation.Withered Huang's leaf falls on the ground, slowly the heap became knoll and stepped on to go to soft., Autumn is yellow!
the in front is one big slice of lawn.The small grass has been withered yellow, can in the middle but bloom many beauty but again not well-known wild flower, standing gracefully, graceful and charming.One big cluster of young man young girl that is dressed in colorful clothes rounds together and joyfully sing ah, jump!
,(next 88) I am getting more understand!In autumn, is colorful, it is yellow, is blue and have the white rainbow for being like a blazing hot summer!
I like autumn of home town!
home town of although autumn there is no fire red maple leafs, there is no gorgeous chrysanthemum, don't become the fruit tree of batch, it is still very beautiful in my heart.
home town of autumn is a windy season.A burst of cool autumnal winds, blewed away a summer of blazing hot, welcomed an autumn of cool.Gao Yuan whom the world collects, the horizon of deep blue afloat wears in fine threads white cloud.Although the weather is a bit dry,the autumnal winds is blow gently, let people have a kind of unspeakable and comfortable.
in autumn, all trees changed.Yellow of, red of, gray of, light green leaf with the breeze fall in, they have in the sky to revolve and have smugly however.They in the sky play around, in admiration of this fine season.The flower in the garden mostly all thanked, the month quarter in only the red, multicolored of the night come to joss-stick, yellow of the little daisy open still and just and aweather.Scan widely to hope to go, those greens that covered our visual field in the past are missing, a several-storied building with snow-white is clear it is thus clear that, make people feeling infinite and broad.
after getting to autumn, that left two kinds of colors-yellow and white.Is yellow of be like gold, gold Can Can of, that is the rice;Being like of white silver, the silver sways of, that is the cotton.Pain a year of farmer the uncles, be all full of happy smiling face on the face, is delighted, is hope.It be all discussing a bumper harvest no matter it is adult or kid, imagine future.
home town of autumn is beautiful.

Diary dispute

Diary dispute
from grade three rise, I have already insisted the habit that keeps diary every day.Everyday happy of, not happy that the matters all write down.It is my happy fruit, my five flavours bottle, recorded my all the sweet and bitter experiences, my heart road process.But these several days, I discovers good elephant of my diary containing the trace to be turned over and led for several days, my book of diary moved again!What is the row?BE who is peeping my diary?I decide to catches 賊 on the scene.
on releasing from school this day, I rush to go home.Falsely the door that sees me the Yan wear, walking over there of the my Nie hand Nie feet, sew through the door, I see the bedside that the mother sit at me and just and obtain what one has wished for a long tily turn over to see my diary.Immediately, a top of head that is red-blooded to dash forward me, I an arrows tread blunt past, the Duo leads the diary in the mother's hand and hurtles her to roar a way:How can you peep my diary?Not a diary?What?The mother as if nothing has occurredly answers.This is my privacy, you should respect my right of privacy!I annoy to shout that the ground throws schoolbag on the bed.You a small fart Hai can have what concealed mine?Finished saying and then camed out room, leave bellyful of grievances and sad of I.
the second day, I mention this matter to the classmates, they also say that they once had same career and had already changed to°from the inchoate exasperation to accustom to and had already just no longer written worry in the diary.Afterwards, I check data and know according to 《nonage protection method 》 rules, the nonage's character dignity power is subjected to special protection of the law, and the character dignity power includes name power, power of honor, and right of privacy...etc. again.The mother hasn't yet me to agree to personally see my diary infringing upon my right of privacy.I download these to the mother to see, she finally agreed to no longer peep my diary.
not with the rules, don't become a square circle.Method at us control our behavior with the method nearby, defend our dignities with the method.Believe, the society will be more harmonious because of but.