Wednesday, February 11, 2015

I am just a stranger


I am just a stranger
sky still deep blue;Water is still pure;The loose cypress is still beautifully green;But already the thing is a person not, take in fine threads melancholy in the bise, stand disconsolate winter, hope to shake don't be within the reach of of it near not- near, shout far not- far;Go back and forth in the prosperous street, fan Mang, my direction?My dream??
rain float wet soft hair;The tears are smooth wet face;The stranger blocked road.Be getting more helpless, foolish foolishly hope a vegetable not acquaint with of stranger, in fact I am in the their eyes, is just also a stranger just, a helpless stranger passes by here, by accident once trampled boundary, left a few footprints just, drive tears smooth Be getting wetter, rain diluted, end, didn't leave a silk ever once walked of trace everything with the breeze floated spread, had no one silk I ever once lived of trace
let the breeze blew about my dream, let rain took my tears hope shake not be within the reach of of dream, under the blue sky, I is a stranger, I be just a stranger, I kissed Xiu but lead, not left one silk trace, my tears my dream won't reply existence, everything with the breeze float spread me be just a stranger, I am just
brush off dust and go to, wave hand, let the world of mortals companies and live whistling spread in fact be a stranger also quite good, can't ast least have too many helpless, everything all with breeze but spread autumnal winds blow kiss bitter yellow defoliation, in succession float fall of the destiny of the leaf arrive this end, however they but safely dance in the wind, waiting for in spring give them the opportunity of the rebirth, I believe, tomorrow of spring, they again happinessly at head laugh heartily
I is a stranger, I be just a stranger spring next year I will again pass by here, I is a stranger, I without sorrow, I didn't worry my Xiao spread me comfortable write a person is high school stage composition in the middle of the teaching the most basic training contents, request student can write have blood have fleshy of living person.What about how to write a person to live?This skill that needs to make use of good depiction. The well-trained usage that describes skill needs after more long-term discipline.Especially thinking is proficient, butter both sides of bread, even need to pay effort of a hardship.However, there were many classmates to pass by in 3 the beginning of the years after composition train, still can not nicely control and make use of this kind of skill.They write the person of hard sign, talk more not ascend lifelike, live vivid now.In fact, writing the good person isn't difficult.(Next 88)in addition to want the peacetime more practices, more important want usually and pay attention to nearby of person, to describe of the person carry on a careful observation and research. Only finally understand thoroughly describe the bottom of object inside, clearly it knows the feeling it know, just can write it jump however paper up.Don't is deep of living foundation, wanting to write a good article can not imagine.So, if in the life already backlog certain living material, how again make use of to describe skill then can write person to live? First, grasp the characteristic of person, with the form is vivid portrayal.The person and otherses have a same place, there is also different place.No matter is an outward appearance, act, the language is still personality, person and others to always have some places homology or likeness and have some places different.To want to write person to live the place of key is the characteristics that wants to write this person, write this person and the differentiation of others.Thou many Chinese and Foreign literature classics provided successful example for us to the depiction of person now.For example the 《Three Kingdoms historical novel 》 medium Cao holds, Liu Bei, close a feather, bore clear etc., all of several 100 personal thing images are so flexible and moving.In the lesson originally in we have already learned a lot of examples like this, for example 《the Lu reaches a boxing to beat town Kansai 》 is one text, the Lu reaches domineering and thickly to stew, tactful, impatient, pass a series of depiction drive vivid lifelikely inform, leave to us deep impression. Carry on depiction to the person heart world secondly, because of to person thought the molding of personality depiction of canning not get away from the heart world.1 kind is to directly carry on depiction to the person heart world, write how it think, how feel.For example lesson originally medium of 《a small matter 》 , be me to see the carter send an old woman toward policeman to halt walk to, have a mental state to directly write, announced to public a knowledge member's mind vibration in a small matter.Carrying on to the heart world is another indirect describe, this kind of describe, the language depiction is most important, because the speech depicts for true feelings passing the depiction to the person language, then canning the thought personality of person.The depiction of person language usually comes out by dialogue embodiment.The dialogue depiction wants to notice a few aspects as follows:One is try hard for the personality of showing the person.If the person wants to say that oneself will say, the words should say, not the author replaces other people to talk.Two want to try hard for in brief, slice to hate loquacious. Person language not the ability original kind keep recording living medium of language, need to polish to process, make it simple and direct, clearly quick, reflect the characteristic that talks.Three is the words of person to still want with facial expression and act to describe knot to put together, complement each other.

No comments:

Post a Comment