Composition of doing a good turn
finish doing morning exercise, each student represents to line up tidy of the troops arrive at a solemn national flag set bottom after gathering, set out.
more than 100 persons constitute of the troops vastly and mightily walk down the street, but sing stalwart but emolliently learn thunder Feng song, but have been already said to smile.About after half an hour, finally arrived at the standing alone old man's welfare hospital in the house.
the classmates take out in succession delicious tasty, the nourishment enrich of fruits, sent to the aged a pair of hand with warm doubleses in.Is close behind, we help the aged the dust for guarding a gate a window, table chair to sweep cleanly again, spotless, have a brand-new look.The aged is rolling on the floor laughing, Kua are we to live thunder Feng!
at this moment, I just realized thunder Feng to help others for the happy classic quality.
the activity ended, we unwilling to partly left a welfare hospital.Pass this activity, I knew:Dedicating an one benevolence to the other people realizes fine emotion not to is to acquire, but pays.Composition of doing a good turn
today, I did a good matter and helped an old grandmother to lead street.
afternoon, I go to new China bookstore and read.Family, I leap to jump all the way small run, imperceptibly was our intersections of the west of the school.When I am about to cross the street, suddenly see an old grandmother shake to sway ground to prepare to cross the street, I put slow step, the in the mind thinks:Want to go to help this old grandmother?Hi!Help others for enjoy, but I am again first that one is little member of team, should go to help her.
I hurriedly run over there and say to old grandmother:Old grandmother, I hand you past!Say two arms that hand hands old grandmother, take green light, the one-step one step slowly once walked zebra crossing.Led street, old grandmother said a quite a few voice thanks to me!I shake to say:Need not, old grandmother all the way walk like.Finish saying I again urgently blunt blunt the ground rush through toward new China bookstore.
my in the mind feels very happy at this time, because I did a good matter.Composition of doing a good turn
I love my mother.My mother also really loves me.
the mother's health condition isn't good, very afraid cold.Once, she got sick, I hurriedly poured one glass water to the mother and took a medicine for mother.I fear a mother suffered, tell that the story lets mother listens to and scatter the mother's attention.
winter in last year is specially cold, a day evening goes to bed a front, I the lying be warm for her on the mother's bed drive.The mother saw oddly ask me:Do you want with mother and sleep together tonight?I say Oh, no!I this is Wen Xi to wait on to kiss.Does Wen Xi wait on to kiss?What mean?The mother felt more strange.My favour says:This is an ancient story, I taught ours 《innovation reading 》 high school from teacher Lin of.Be chase bedding warmth first and, you sleep of time not cold.Mother touched ground of Kua I am a good kid.
I think:The mother is very hard, we should help our mother the affair for doing some what lies in one's powers more.Composition of doing a good turn
morning, thin awake.It sees a window outside, the sun only shines in glory, and the weather is very good.Is thin to think:Great occasion of nation stanza of today I am thin to do a good affair.To, if the homework of E E can't write me to see a thin elder brother the weather is really good today to it, you and I have fun in a short while.Nana says.Go away, little devil who have a great achievement the man plays with you, I want to do a special affair today, don't bother me!Nana cries and discommoded to sadly leave.Is thin to think and think, I should do what good affair, in the state of the nation this day?If the bad person comes to to kidnap my grandmother, I use to hunt qiang to beat it!Grandmother at the right moment yells at this time:Thin darling carries table the tea on the word to grandmother to drink for grandmother!I favour this, your own business do-it-yourself, you want to drink tea by yourself, oneself pours to drink for he or she, I the great occasion of nation stanza want to do a good matter today, have no the effort pour tea for grandmother!Is thin to fantasy again:If the shameless dog drops into river, I want to neglect the peace or chaos get shameless dog to come up, exactly the shameless dog came and reached to shake medicine tail to say at this time:Is thin, please give me a little water to drink, I am very very thirsty!Get away, I favour this?Who sometimes drink for you, don't disturb the affair that I think that the state of the nation does a good turn.
thin wanted to don't also figure out that a good affair comes and then arrives at a mother to ask all day long:Mother, I think the great occasion of nation successively does a matter piece, don't know to do what good?Have fun with Nana, arrive tea for grandmother, or give the shameless dog some water to drink, all call to do a good turn, do a good turn and know from nearby of the affair start to start in!
Wednesday, February 11, 2015
with the person in the book airtight language
with the person in the book airtight language
evening, I feel beloved 《Andersen's nursery tale 》 once in a very long while can not fallen asleep, in the dim moonlight, I arrived at a place of snow and icebound, there, 1 wears to break dress, barefoot, hand jelly of the red little girl is taking a box of match to the pedestrian for passing by call sell, isn't she the little girl in 《match seller's little girl 》 !
I quickly go straight up to go and take off own coat to throw on for little girl.Thank you!The little girl appreciates of say to me.The little girl that thoughts of such a wretchedness finally will pathetic dying, my in the mind is really not pleasurable.Need not, to, do you have grandmother?Have!Little girl eyes inside deeply happy ray of light, but immediately obscure next go to, she go to heaven.I hurriedly comfort her:Don't be sad that two of you definitely meet noodles!The little girl arouses to move:Really?Can I really see grandmother?Answer her to is affirmation that deeply sinks.She will at heaven in meet with grandmother.
your father mother?They they are in the home.The little girl throat at this time's seeming is what things choked, the voice breaks continuously continuous of they to you, O.K.?Little girl deep breathing for a while, tell me:Still go.Still go?The little girl is obviously telling a lie, let own kid sell match in the snow and icebound, this, also go?I didn't ask again what, time just wanted to ask, spread the dialogue that a burst of voice interrupted two of us.
the old elder sister get up!The younger brother shouts loudly in my ear, , originally this is a dream!A marvellous dream!If, the happy life of match seller's little girl and grandmother at heaven in, that should much good! Person describe, according to describe of object, can is divided into outward appearance depiction(portrait, clothes and expression), language depiction, action depiction and mental state depiction and detail depiction.Write a person, can directly write hair and draw eyes, make it lifelike, this calls direct depiction;Can also pass an indirect method to write a person, if say to introduce someone through a turning of third party, pass to describe third party to come to anti- Chen someone to set off by contrast by writing prospects thing a someone etc..(Next 88)according to describing person of detailed slightly, importance, wear Mo of thick thin, we can also induce the person depiction copies for white, the cartoon type delineate, thick Mo heavy colourful thin copy an etc.. A, the white copy the writing Jian Lian's simplicity, don't add to exaggerate to set off by contrast.It doesn't have the depiction of strong color, don't ask for help of parable and compare etc. rhetoric skill, also need not or use less adjective, still keep describing the image of having an accident the thing.Such as: It what to come in is a black thin Sir, moustache, wear to fix attention on a mirror, ride on one various books of foldings.(Lu fast 《rattan wild Sir 》 ) empty few languages, activate one to is frugal life and cure to learn careful scholar's image. Two, the cartoon type delineate namely with the tone of exaggerated skill, Ye Yu, the person delineate into a strange form of strange form, fantastic six leave of image, sneer at, hate by expression, sympathize with etc. thought feelings.Such as: He if lower the head to see, positively is could not see own toe, the part in the center swell up, will hold up view.The flower grey hair that is sparse to pull to a tee combs Long backward, dipped water and there is no one to be confused.On the face of pure white Xi, can't see a crease, be like just the plain wheat roll of pot.In order to being fat, nose, eyes seem to be specially small;In order to being small, seem to be particularly to fascinatingly have absolute being.(Wang Run Zi 《sell a crab 》 ) pass depiction, mold the image that filters a mouth:Is old and fat, clean and neat fashionable, rich the Tai is ample, Gao Ren Yi etc..Permeate the derision of bookmaker in the depiction. Three, the thick Mo is heavy colourful thin copy namely with vivid, image, vivid portrayal of language, in many ways, multilayers and many angles, the delicacy completely depicts person image.Such as: Sit at south head of is a thin thin, the Chinese of 50 top and bottoms;Wear a long gown with yellow tooth, bite a cigarette holder in mouth, follow that light of fire of a bright a bright, the Teng rises a burst of smoke. His face is yellow in take white, thin call the person worry and seem big disease lately the person more, but the spirit is very good, there is no a little dispirited appearance, hair approximately an inch long, obviously didn't shear for a long time, but a root per root vigorously keeps Shu.The beard beats an eye very much and seem the thick Mo write of belong to body one word. Is yellow in take a white face, thin worrisome, keep Shu on the head inch grow of hair;Tooth Huang Yu Sha's long gown;Belong to a body one word beard;A yellow cigarette holder held in left hand, a head of of Anne's smoke has already fumed black.( Tired 《one side 》 ) these are three, the author passes overall and meticulous depiction and depict source in under the hard condition of Lu fast spirit feature, a more old more stubborn great image of warrior, then impressively stand erect in our in fronts.
with the person in the book airtight language
evening, I feel beloved 《Andersen's nursery tale 》 once in a very long while can not fallen asleep, in the dim moonlight, I arrived at a place of snow and icebound, there, 1 wears to break dress, barefoot, hand jelly of the red little girl is taking a box of match to the pedestrian for passing by call sell, isn't she the little girl in 《match seller's little girl 》 !
I quickly go straight up to go and take off own coat to throw on for little girl.Thank you!The little girl appreciates of say to me.The little girl that thoughts of such a wretchedness finally will pathetic dying, my in the mind is really not pleasurable.Need not, to, do you have grandmother?Have!Little girl eyes inside deeply happy ray of light, but immediately obscure next go to, she go to heaven.I hurriedly comfort her:Don't be sad that two of you definitely meet noodles!The little girl arouses to move:Really?Can I really see grandmother?Answer her to is affirmation that deeply sinks.She will at heaven in meet with grandmother.
your father mother?They they are in the home.The little girl throat at this time's seeming is what things choked, the voice breaks continuously continuous of they to you, O.K.?Little girl deep breathing for a while, tell me:Still go.Still go?The little girl is obviously telling a lie, let own kid sell match in the snow and icebound, this, also go?I didn't ask again what, time just wanted to ask, spread the dialogue that a burst of voice interrupted two of us.
the old elder sister get up!The younger brother shouts loudly in my ear, , originally this is a dream!A marvellous dream!If, the happy life of match seller's little girl and grandmother at heaven in, that should much good! Person describe, according to describe of object, can is divided into outward appearance depiction(portrait, clothes and expression), language depiction, action depiction and mental state depiction and detail depiction.Write a person, can directly write hair and draw eyes, make it lifelike, this calls direct depiction;Can also pass an indirect method to write a person, if say to introduce someone through a turning of third party, pass to describe third party to come to anti- Chen someone to set off by contrast by writing prospects thing a someone etc..(Next 88)according to describing person of detailed slightly, importance, wear Mo of thick thin, we can also induce the person depiction copies for white, the cartoon type delineate, thick Mo heavy colourful thin copy an etc.. A, the white copy the writing Jian Lian's simplicity, don't add to exaggerate to set off by contrast.It doesn't have the depiction of strong color, don't ask for help of parable and compare etc. rhetoric skill, also need not or use less adjective, still keep describing the image of having an accident the thing.Such as: It what to come in is a black thin Sir, moustache, wear to fix attention on a mirror, ride on one various books of foldings.(Lu fast 《rattan wild Sir 》 ) empty few languages, activate one to is frugal life and cure to learn careful scholar's image. Two, the cartoon type delineate namely with the tone of exaggerated skill, Ye Yu, the person delineate into a strange form of strange form, fantastic six leave of image, sneer at, hate by expression, sympathize with etc. thought feelings.Such as: He if lower the head to see, positively is could not see own toe, the part in the center swell up, will hold up view.The flower grey hair that is sparse to pull to a tee combs Long backward, dipped water and there is no one to be confused.On the face of pure white Xi, can't see a crease, be like just the plain wheat roll of pot.In order to being fat, nose, eyes seem to be specially small;In order to being small, seem to be particularly to fascinatingly have absolute being.(Wang Run Zi 《sell a crab 》 ) pass depiction, mold the image that filters a mouth:Is old and fat, clean and neat fashionable, rich the Tai is ample, Gao Ren Yi etc..Permeate the derision of bookmaker in the depiction. Three, the thick Mo is heavy colourful thin copy namely with vivid, image, vivid portrayal of language, in many ways, multilayers and many angles, the delicacy completely depicts person image.Such as: Sit at south head of is a thin thin, the Chinese of 50 top and bottoms;Wear a long gown with yellow tooth, bite a cigarette holder in mouth, follow that light of fire of a bright a bright, the Teng rises a burst of smoke. His face is yellow in take white, thin call the person worry and seem big disease lately the person more, but the spirit is very good, there is no a little dispirited appearance, hair approximately an inch long, obviously didn't shear for a long time, but a root per root vigorously keeps Shu.The beard beats an eye very much and seem the thick Mo write of belong to body one word. Is yellow in take a white face, thin worrisome, keep Shu on the head inch grow of hair;Tooth Huang Yu Sha's long gown;Belong to a body one word beard;A yellow cigarette holder held in left hand, a head of of Anne's smoke has already fumed black.( Tired 《one side 》 ) these are three, the author passes overall and meticulous depiction and depict source in under the hard condition of Lu fast spirit feature, a more old more stubborn great image of warrior, then impressively stand erect in our in fronts.
I am just a stranger
I am just a stranger
sky still deep blue;Water is still pure;The loose cypress is still beautifully green;But already the thing is a person not, take in fine threads melancholy in the bise, stand disconsolate winter, hope to shake don't be within the reach of of it near not- near, shout far not- far;Go back and forth in the prosperous street, fan Mang, my direction?My dream??
rain float wet soft hair;The tears are smooth wet face;The stranger blocked road.Be getting more helpless, foolish foolishly hope a vegetable not acquaint with of stranger, in fact I am in the their eyes, is just also a stranger just, a helpless stranger passes by here, by accident once trampled boundary, left a few footprints just, drive tears smooth Be getting wetter, rain diluted, end, didn't leave a silk ever once walked of trace everything with the breeze floated spread, had no one silk I ever once lived of trace
let the breeze blew about my dream, let rain took my tears hope shake not be within the reach of of dream, under the blue sky, I is a stranger, I be just a stranger, I kissed Xiu but lead, not left one silk trace, my tears my dream won't reply existence, everything with the breeze float spread me be just a stranger, I am just
brush off dust and go to, wave hand, let the world of mortals companies and live whistling spread in fact be a stranger also quite good, can't ast least have too many helpless, everything all with breeze but spread autumnal winds blow kiss bitter yellow defoliation, in succession float fall of the destiny of the leaf arrive this end, however they but safely dance in the wind, waiting for in spring give them the opportunity of the rebirth, I believe, tomorrow of spring, they again happinessly at head laugh heartily
I is a stranger, I be just a stranger spring next year I will again pass by here, I is a stranger, I without sorrow, I didn't worry my Xiao spread me comfortable write a person is high school stage composition in the middle of the teaching the most basic training contents, request student can write have blood have fleshy of living person.What about how to write a person to live?This skill that needs to make use of good depiction. The well-trained usage that describes skill needs after more long-term discipline.Especially thinking is proficient, butter both sides of bread, even need to pay effort of a hardship.However, there were many classmates to pass by in 3 the beginning of the years after composition train, still can not nicely control and make use of this kind of skill.They write the person of hard sign, talk more not ascend lifelike, live vivid now.In fact, writing the good person isn't difficult.(Next 88)in addition to want the peacetime more practices, more important want usually and pay attention to nearby of person, to describe of the person carry on a careful observation and research. Only finally understand thoroughly describe the bottom of object inside, clearly it knows the feeling it know, just can write it jump however paper up.Don't is deep of living foundation, wanting to write a good article can not imagine.So, if in the life already backlog certain living material, how again make use of to describe skill then can write person to live? First, grasp the characteristic of person, with the form is vivid portrayal.The person and otherses have a same place, there is also different place.No matter is an outward appearance, act, the language is still personality, person and others to always have some places homology or likeness and have some places different.To want to write person to live the place of key is the characteristics that wants to write this person, write this person and the differentiation of others.Thou many Chinese and Foreign literature classics provided successful example for us to the depiction of person now.For example the 《Three Kingdoms historical novel 》 medium Cao holds, Liu Bei, close a feather, bore clear etc., all of several 100 personal thing images are so flexible and moving.In the lesson originally in we have already learned a lot of examples like this, for example 《the Lu reaches a boxing to beat town Kansai 》 is one text, the Lu reaches domineering and thickly to stew, tactful, impatient, pass a series of depiction drive vivid lifelikely inform, leave to us deep impression. Carry on depiction to the person heart world secondly, because of to person thought the molding of personality depiction of canning not get away from the heart world.1 kind is to directly carry on depiction to the person heart world, write how it think, how feel.For example lesson originally medium of 《a small matter 》 , be me to see the carter send an old woman toward policeman to halt walk to, have a mental state to directly write, announced to public a knowledge member's mind vibration in a small matter.Carrying on to the heart world is another indirect describe, this kind of describe, the language depiction is most important, because the speech depicts for true feelings passing the depiction to the person language, then canning the thought personality of person.The depiction of person language usually comes out by dialogue embodiment.The dialogue depiction wants to notice a few aspects as follows:One is try hard for the personality of showing the person.If the person wants to say that oneself will say, the words should say, not the author replaces other people to talk.Two want to try hard for in brief, slice to hate loquacious. Person language not the ability original kind keep recording living medium of language, need to polish to process, make it simple and direct, clearly quick, reflect the characteristic that talks.Three is the words of person to still want with facial expression and act to describe knot to put together, complement each other.
I am just a stranger
sky still deep blue;Water is still pure;The loose cypress is still beautifully green;But already the thing is a person not, take in fine threads melancholy in the bise, stand disconsolate winter, hope to shake don't be within the reach of of it near not- near, shout far not- far;Go back and forth in the prosperous street, fan Mang, my direction?My dream??
rain float wet soft hair;The tears are smooth wet face;The stranger blocked road.Be getting more helpless, foolish foolishly hope a vegetable not acquaint with of stranger, in fact I am in the their eyes, is just also a stranger just, a helpless stranger passes by here, by accident once trampled boundary, left a few footprints just, drive tears smooth Be getting wetter, rain diluted, end, didn't leave a silk ever once walked of trace everything with the breeze floated spread, had no one silk I ever once lived of trace
let the breeze blew about my dream, let rain took my tears hope shake not be within the reach of of dream, under the blue sky, I is a stranger, I be just a stranger, I kissed Xiu but lead, not left one silk trace, my tears my dream won't reply existence, everything with the breeze float spread me be just a stranger, I am just
brush off dust and go to, wave hand, let the world of mortals companies and live whistling spread in fact be a stranger also quite good, can't ast least have too many helpless, everything all with breeze but spread autumnal winds blow kiss bitter yellow defoliation, in succession float fall of the destiny of the leaf arrive this end, however they but safely dance in the wind, waiting for in spring give them the opportunity of the rebirth, I believe, tomorrow of spring, they again happinessly at head laugh heartily
I is a stranger, I be just a stranger spring next year I will again pass by here, I is a stranger, I without sorrow, I didn't worry my Xiao spread me comfortable write a person is high school stage composition in the middle of the teaching the most basic training contents, request student can write have blood have fleshy of living person.What about how to write a person to live?This skill that needs to make use of good depiction. The well-trained usage that describes skill needs after more long-term discipline.Especially thinking is proficient, butter both sides of bread, even need to pay effort of a hardship.However, there were many classmates to pass by in 3 the beginning of the years after composition train, still can not nicely control and make use of this kind of skill.They write the person of hard sign, talk more not ascend lifelike, live vivid now.In fact, writing the good person isn't difficult.(Next 88)in addition to want the peacetime more practices, more important want usually and pay attention to nearby of person, to describe of the person carry on a careful observation and research. Only finally understand thoroughly describe the bottom of object inside, clearly it knows the feeling it know, just can write it jump however paper up.Don't is deep of living foundation, wanting to write a good article can not imagine.So, if in the life already backlog certain living material, how again make use of to describe skill then can write person to live? First, grasp the characteristic of person, with the form is vivid portrayal.The person and otherses have a same place, there is also different place.No matter is an outward appearance, act, the language is still personality, person and others to always have some places homology or likeness and have some places different.To want to write person to live the place of key is the characteristics that wants to write this person, write this person and the differentiation of others.Thou many Chinese and Foreign literature classics provided successful example for us to the depiction of person now.For example the 《Three Kingdoms historical novel 》 medium Cao holds, Liu Bei, close a feather, bore clear etc., all of several 100 personal thing images are so flexible and moving.In the lesson originally in we have already learned a lot of examples like this, for example 《the Lu reaches a boxing to beat town Kansai 》 is one text, the Lu reaches domineering and thickly to stew, tactful, impatient, pass a series of depiction drive vivid lifelikely inform, leave to us deep impression. Carry on depiction to the person heart world secondly, because of to person thought the molding of personality depiction of canning not get away from the heart world.1 kind is to directly carry on depiction to the person heart world, write how it think, how feel.For example lesson originally medium of 《a small matter 》 , be me to see the carter send an old woman toward policeman to halt walk to, have a mental state to directly write, announced to public a knowledge member's mind vibration in a small matter.Carrying on to the heart world is another indirect describe, this kind of describe, the language depiction is most important, because the speech depicts for true feelings passing the depiction to the person language, then canning the thought personality of person.The depiction of person language usually comes out by dialogue embodiment.The dialogue depiction wants to notice a few aspects as follows:One is try hard for the personality of showing the person.If the person wants to say that oneself will say, the words should say, not the author replaces other people to talk.Two want to try hard for in brief, slice to hate loquacious. Person language not the ability original kind keep recording living medium of language, need to polish to process, make it simple and direct, clearly quick, reflect the characteristic that talks.Three is the words of person to still want with facial expression and act to describe knot to put together, complement each other.
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